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These are the rooms and these are still of where my filming has taken place.

Changes Made

I have just re-filmed a lot of scenes from my first draft. I will have the first draft up as soon as i can to show that, but i am going to explain what modifications i have made compared to my pitch to the class that is already posted. Fistly, i have modified the voice of the charecter Andrei. The reason behind this is that the first draft had a real bad contrast of a northern english accent and a strong american/italian accent. Also the piece will fit better if my charecters all have an english accent. To add to that the charecters voice in my first draft came across quite quietly on the screen so some modifications had to be done to that.
Secondly i have added in different shots of Andrei. The first draft only included one shot of him, making it seem very repetative and not showing off any real camera/filming skills. So to adjust and improve this new shots have been filmed.
I have also added in shots of Marcus' wife, who has been kidnapped, tied and gagged and slumped in a corner with a lot of high angle shots to show her helplessness.
Added vto this, a big addition is the flashback i have filmed. The reason behind the kidnapping has been filmed to add a different concept to my peice and to bring it to life a bit more. I will add this by flashing white across the screen with the voice-over of Andrei describing the action. The footage will probably be black and whit and have some sort of effect to make it look old.
I filmed all of the footage in and around my house, all on my land.

My Pitch

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